October 27, 2014 - 16:42
I love your topic of your paper. Ozeki mentions a lot about GMOs and I really like the route you are taking. You might want to further think about what exactly is the art of nature? Maybe you might want to connect your last quote about diversity to the world as a whole (ex: different races). I like that you are comparing both sides; however, you might want to keep an open mind to as why farmers decide to plant GMOs instead have a set viewpoint that GMOs are bad. All in all, I really like the direction your paper is taking. Keep it up!