rewrite and new lens

Last week I didn't use a lens in my paper. I wanted to but couldn't find a lens, because relationships are a quite abstract topic.

So I'll change my focus to Natalie's upward social climb, and maybe mention a little about Michel as I write. Anne recommended an article called "Models of Minority College-going and Retention: Cultural Integrity versus Cultural Suicide" as my lens. That article talks about factors that allow a minority person to acquire further education, and discusses the pros and cons of the influence on that person.