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Week 2: Who Does the Omnivore Trust? And Why?

Anne Dalke's picture

In The Omnivore's Dilemma, Michael Pollan takes on a number of pieces of conventional wisdom. He challenges the Whole Foods supermarket chain, for instance, for obscuring, in its marketing, its involvement in the "industrial organic complex." Contrariwise, he challenges vegans & vegetarians for their failure to understand how the natural world works, and finds their ethical position naive. So: how do you react to such claims? Are you convinced? DO YOU TRUST POLLAN? WHY/WHY NOT? Do you want to challenge them in turn, push back? Or...?

Anne Dalke's picture

wherefrom our food aversions?

I don't know what's happening over there in Dalton 2, but in Dalton 1 we have been talking (among other things) about our food aversions. I seem to be the only one in the room who will eat anything (including rotten shark, which I "enjoyed" in Iceland a few years ago, washed down w/ an as-awful and very strong drink known as "Black Death").

So I got to wondering....wherefrom our food aversions? Do they come bundled in the genetic package each of us arrives with? Are they affected by what our mothers eat while they are pregnant? Are they enculturated, the result of socialization? How might we move towards a better understanding of food preferences (and aversions)?

Here's a report on one study that was done on shaping dietary preferences.

Avocado's picture

Replacement for mine other (this with mine name!)

 I actually don't think Pollan is that pushy about anything. As far as his discourse against vegetarians, I didn't see so much assertion against their views as encouragement to invest in them, to back them up further by experiencing/reaffirming why they don't eat meat. I may be cheating right now, because I've read more of the sections... because I read half of them by mistake... NAY! On purpose! **Perseverance in believing I am intelligent is key!!!!** but his idea of making slaughterhouse walls transparent is excellent. Being vegetarian, it would be an absolute encouragement to me to see that the cows killed are (ideally) slaughtered humanely. Slaughtered humanely, but slaughtered nonetheless~ for better or worse I would remain vegetarian, comforted that I had made a more informed, objective study, before reverting back to my emotions. It at least allows me to discern between moral/political/economic/societal/schma acceptability and my own personal bubblesphere of hippiedom.

 

I trust Pollan because he has humor. Not that he is particularly funny or wildly entertaining~ more like self-effacement, or an admittance of his inability to write the expose he wanted to, because they wouldn't let him through the blue door. Science offers no opinion, and any conclusion, he says, based solely on science is based, for the most part, on simplicity. One variable at a time is all that can be tested~ though I think extensive studies in some arenas would allow a buildup of individual variables into a very complex system. I think the point he's trying to make is that whatever that system is, we haven't figured it out yet, and to base an opinion on a factor, rather than a whole, is a mistake. I trust him because he relates only what is personal, and because he distinguishes his opinions AS opinions, not facts. And if he does state a scientific fact, he doesn't assign an opinion to it.

 

avietgirl's picture

I trust Pollan

 I believe that I can trust Pollan. From what I’ve read, he put a lot of his time in researching where his foods come from. He not only done research alone, but put effort into visiting where the animals come from. This makes me feel that he is a reliable source. He was being very objective in his writing and doesn’t try to push his opinion onto anyone. He also points out two sides to an argument. He points out both sides to an argument about whether eating meat is right or wrong but never did he say which one is better. Like the fact that he present himself as a confused person. He says that after learning about how the system of food works, he decided to temporarily become a vegetarian. 

pbrodfue's picture

Pollan strikes again

NY Times piece on Big Food vs. Big Insurance

Published: September 9, 2009

 

Anne Dalke's picture

another new reading for next Tuesday's class

John Mackay, "Health Care Reform." Wall Street Journal. Rpt. The CEO's Blog: Whole Foods Market. August 14, 2009.

pbrodfue's picture

What to eat?

I know this is a bit off topic, but I wanted to address the question of what to eat, now that Pollan has destroyed your comfortable eating habits.  He actually addressed this issue in - In Defense of Food:  An Easter's Manifesto, his follow-up to Omnivore's Dilemma after receiving a lot of feedback on how his book spoiled the joy of eating and left people wondering what to eat.  His philosophy is simple:  eat food, not too much, and mostly plants!  Obviously, this leads to the question, what is food?  His answer, food is anything his / your grandmother would recognize.  If you are young, that answer is not helpful, so he further defined food as anything with 5 or fewer ingredients (more stories to filter through!).  Hence, a Twinkie is not food (39 ingredients), while but a small piece of beef is food.  (If you want to hear a funny take on this topic listen to this short mp3 file (download) from his appearance on Wait, Wait Don't Tell Me.

Pollan in the Philadelphia Inquirer - If you read the paper today, there was an article about Elevation Burger, which claims that there burgers are .... "not merely fresh-ground, or all-beef, or naturally raised; they are - top this! - "100 percent organic, grass-fed, free-range beef."  The article further states... But its "biggest contribution to a better planet," the fine print on its shake cup says, is the beef itself: it's fed on grass, not corn, which sucks up far less carbon dioxide, and, well, if all cattle were pastured (not grain-fed), it would be like taking four million cars off the road.

It might be the only shake cup with a footnote: The essence of that aforementioned claim can be found, it reports, in The Omnivore's Dilemma, p. 198. (And so, yes, there it is. You can look it up.)

The Omnivore's Dilemma, of course, is eco-author Michael Pollan's passionate critique of the depredations of industrial agriculture, and currently the sacred text of ethical eaters: supersizing and "cornification" don't just make you fat, he warns, but make the soil dangerously thinner (and the water and air worse).

Whether Pollan would be flattered that his critique is being stamped on shake cups to encourage the consumption of more burgers is another question.

Has anyone eaten an elevation burger? Did you notice their story on the shake cup! 

 

 

c.k.koech's picture

I wanna know...

I trust him.

He is just like anyone of us. he has eaten food all of his life and now he wants to find out where his food actually comes from. We all until recently have lived in blind ignorance when it comes to our food. He like a few others who are stepping out to inform themselves as well as others about the fact that what we think are chicken nuggets are not really chicken nuggets and the corn epidemic is real and the fact that even the organic food movement has been tainted, for what??. I think thats the reason for his book, why would he have to lie about this stuff...I actually don't even think this is a question about trust, I don't think Pollan wants us to trust him, i mean we've trusted so much when it comes to food..I trusted that "happy cows come from California" and that my toast didn't have corn in it..and look were it got us. Pollan doesn't care if we trust him or not but he is giving us the opportunity to learn and develop an understanding into the Truths of our food.

ygao's picture

to trust or not to trust? it's a dilemma

After reading some of the chapters in The Omnivore's Dilemma, I have two thoughts. First, I must become a farmer one day, plant all my vegetables and fruits, and raise my own animals. Or, second, I must not think at all about my food hereafter. The first thought expresses my trust in Pollan's ideas and the variety of facts he provided to prove his ideas legible. He did not force any ideas into the readers' minds, but gave us space to think, to make our own minds and choices about what to eat and how we think about the food on our plates. The book gave us chances to challenge our own minds and to think for ourselves. One can agree or disagree, there are no specific ideas to be agreed on in this book. Pollan's neutral way of expressing thoughts make me trust him.

I am, however, stressed by his ideas as well. True, as I mentioned before, he did present convincing facts in the book, but I cannot help but to be annoyed by not only the facts he layed out but also the way he appeared to be not concerned but indifferent and biased of the ideas in some of the text. I am used to reading books that have a central idea. I mean, why would the author write a book if his ideas were not biased or different from everyone else's? But the way Pollan wrote this book made me more frustrated at how he does not state his own opinion but to let us, the readers, have a mindful to think about and try to make out our own sets of judgements, not his. And that, puts all of us in a thought dilemma. Then again, I suppose this is a kind of new reading for me. Also, what I find disturbing by this book is that I feel that my knowing these facts does not make my life better easier or better. During the past few days, I kept thinking about where my food came from and how they are raised, and that perturbed my apetite. This discomfort and the dilemma he let us in make me not want to trust him, no matter how convincing he might be. Come on, let me eat and simply enjoy my meals without thinking too much and make myself gag. Call me ignorant if that is what it takes.

nbagaria's picture

New Perspective!

Being a vegetarian has almost become a cornerstone of my identity both as an individual and as someone who belongs to a society where being one is considered “good”. This is not to say that I would judge someone who ate meat; but after really thinking about it I now feel that maybe not judging was my way of avoiding getting into a moral or ethical debate of any sort. In fact, after reading a substantial portion of Pollan’s book I am convinced that I would have gotten into a debate with a lot of people about the topic if I had decided to do any such thing. A topic which in hindsight I knew little or nothing about. I never really gave the idea that man was meant to be an omnivore much thought before I read the portion of the chapter explaining how if everyone of us became vegetarian there would be absolute chaos and pandemonium in the natural world. I had never before realized how intricately man in linked with nature or more accurately how nature is linked to man. When Pollan described how “The bison is a human artifact, for it was shaped by Indians”. The idea finally sunk in. While reading this book I often asked myself if I should really trust Pollan because he was literally almost asking me to judge myself. Sometimes, I almost felt that I had already been judged by Pollan. It was only when I read the part in the book where he decides to become a vegetarian just to see if that can help to answer some of his questions did I really start to trust him. I was amazed that a man who had eaten meat all his life was willing to give it up simply because he wanted gain some insight into the relevance of what he ate. Silly as that might sound, that was exactly when I started to trust him. "For, brief as it is, the life expectancy of a farm animal would be considerably briefer in the world beyond the pasture fence or chicken coop." Prior to reading this I never thought it possible for man to have a sort of symbiotic relationship with animals. Especially a relationship where one participant of the symbiotic relationship would actually be willing to give itself body, mind and soul(Sorry, I do believe that animals have souls, despite what Joel has to say about it.) to the other participant and yet when I think of it both from and evolutionary and survival point of view it makes complete sense. The animal would like to ensure its physical safety and as man is the most highly developed organism in the natural world, the animal would naturally like his protection. This would also ensure that its species continues into the next generation. According to Pollan "If there is any new right we need to establish, maybe this is the one: the right, I mean, to look” and after having done some thinking of my own, I couldn’t agree with him more. For it is only after seeing the entire life and eventual killing of the animal whose meat one is about to consume can one fully understand the magnitude of what is being placed before him. It is not just a slice of meat bought off the supermarket shelf, but an actual animal which was alive at one point of time.

Jessica's picture

Pollan is also an omnivore in dilemma

Although Pollan, who has attempted to be a vegetarian himself, seems to favor the argument against industrial organic complex, he still presents different aspects of the issue. After all, Pollan is also an omnivore who is confused as to what side he should take. Throughout the book, he is not constantly arguing why cruelty should never be justified or that everyone should become vegetarians. Rather, he also brings up the point that the term "cruelty" itself was created according to the moral standards of humans. In my opinion, he reasons out both of his claims well. Because he recognizes both sides of the story, I trust Pollan. Had Pollan mentioned only about one side of the issue, I would not have trusted him because I would've thought he might've been biased. But Pollan himself is an omnivore in dilemma, and therefore it should've been in his best interest to carefully gather valid facts and resources to build on both sides of the story in order for him to take a side.

lkuswanto's picture

annoying yet convincing and resourceful

 Honestly, I find Michael Pollan very annoying. Why does he have to make life harder than it already is? Why does he have to make such a hassle of eating? Why can't he let us eat in peace? 

All of the informations and facts that he wrote are currently occupying my mind. Now, I can't really enjoy my food when I'm supposed to. All of the horrifying truths keep haunting me whenever I spoon something into my mouth. Yet, I trust him because what he wrote was not based on his emotional perspective. He provided data and evidence to support his findings. For me, everything must be proven by evidence before I can trust in it and Pollan did a good job in convincing me.

He did not try to shift our point of view to a particular side. Instead, he gave us all kinds of information regarding it and let us decide what we want to do with it. I like the way he conveys his experience. As for me, he is not biased towards a side (well, at least for me!). He gave the pros and cons of both sides. All that he was trying to do is reveal his findings to us.

Thanks to him, now I know lots of things about the food that I am eating and to be more concious of my diet. But thanks to him too for making me feel guilty whenever I eat meat (I'm not going to be a vegetarian though!).

kgrassle's picture

Honesty notes Trustworthiness

 Pollan has not only researched the pros and cons to eating meat, being a vegetarian, and buying organic food, but has also changed his lifestyle based on what he has found.  By not only telling a story about food, but also applying it to his own life, he has advertised himself as a very trustworthy person.  Who would take the time to follow the food that he/she has bought and struggle with his/her own lifestyle if the person wasn't truly passionate about making positive changes.  

What to eat is something we constantly struggle with.  I feel that at Bryn Mawr, we are offered a wide variety of food.  I sometimes find it overwhelming looking at the many different choices in the dining hall, wondering if the meals that I am eating are actually healthy for me.  Pollan struggles with these same choices in the book.  By describing his own struggles with choosing food and his honesty about his struggles, I find that I trust what he has to say.  He appears to be very open about what others have to say, which makes it more likely that he is open with his writing.  Rather than painting a 2d picture, he is trying to create a sculpture that shows the many sides of the human meal.  

ED's picture

Do I Trust Pollan?

Yes.

He asks a lot of questions at the end of paragraphs in which he's spewed a lot of evidence that seemingly points in one direction. They are questions that uproot/challenge most of what he just wrote about. They are not preachy phrases-- you will only find preachy phrases ("preachy phrases" is hard to say quickly out loud- try it) used in a playful (though still very astute/fair) manner, like "food faddists, take note". Pollan has a playful voice in general. That makes me trust him, because he knows how to incorporate his personality into his research without A. advocating for his own opinions on food (or even presenting concrete opinions, for that matter), B. straying from solid research and fact/relying only on theory and experience. He really has done his research. Do I trust that the research is true? Well, it seems well-rounded-- he gives info for both sides-- so I trust him. But if I really were skeptical, it would be awfully easy for me to trace Pollan's facts (because he cites them so thoroughly) to see for myself if they're true or not. But the very thoroughness of his citing makes me trust him...; why would he bother to be so transparent if they were false citations?

There you have my reasons for trusting Pollan: 1. his intelligence shines in his ability to playfully show his personality/ideas while still staying appropriately objective. 2. he cites his sources very, very confidently.

Last thing I want to say-- in terms of the whole vegetarianism thing, I am always a believer in "everything in moderation". So, have a few local farms in every state that "peacefully" kill animals for meat, and have people eat less meat. Wasn't it like that before the world became so darn abundant and civilized anyway? That meat was a rarer food item, or at least one that was more difficult to obtain in substantial quantities than carbs, fungi or produce,-- and therefore, when it was obtained, was celebrated (Pollan mentions some traditions based around meat-- Thanksgiving turkey, ballpark franks, your great grandma's brisket...)? Yes, there are a lot of people, and yes, we live in a country of freedom and choice (I can hear the uproar now: "You can't tell me what to eat or not eat!! This is America!!")-- but, well, sorry to sound terrible, but maybe we should just have less people....? (I'm a Maluthusiast). -Emily

rshen's picture

Drawn to the personal Pollan

To be completely honest, I find myself becoming detached while reading Omnivore's Dilemma. I'm a happy carnivore, so it's probable that the truth hurts, but I am drawn reluctantly to Pollan's argument when he uses his own voice. I mean, sure he can throw the facts at me, and even if I get myself in the proper mindset to accept facts, I can't control my mind shutting down. I can however, accept his own opinions. When he brings in his personal experiences, I can't help but become more attentive to his points.

What bothers me the most is the impossibility I'm faced with when he just dishes out the cold truth. For instance, in the latest chapter describing the slaughtering of cows on the conveyor belt, it's too extreme a situation for my brain to comprehend. I'm not doubting the truth of the matter, and it obviously is a gruesome death that I think even I, the most carnivorous one of my friends, can sympathize and realize the brutality of the situation. The impossibility lies in that I'm not sure I'll ever have my own farm where I'd be an active member of my future meal's life. So what am I to do being so removed from the cow that I love to eat? Become a valiant vegetarian? Then I'm troubled with the whole idea that I'd be obsessing over my food and instead of eating being a pleasurable and nourishing experience (like the French), I'd be hampered down with moral implications. I guess what I'm saying is I'm a selfish person; can't I just know the truth and still enjoy a juicy bacon cheeseburger?

Anyways, I think I'm having a genuinely difficult time comprehending this whole hidden truth since I'm so conflicted. Thank gosh that Pollan divulges his own personal struggles so I don't feel like I'm being lectured.

 

 

ellenv's picture

Pollan

After reading the first couple of chapters assigned for class, I was not entirely sure of what I thought of Pollan and his way of presenting information. After ready chapters 16 and 17 however, my view of Pollan changed. In those chapters Pollan shows that he is able to look at different concerns from various view points. Not only did you acknowledge that he was a meat eater, but he then searched out another option and tried to look at what questions could be asked of those that are vegetarian. I thought that this was a very thorough job and the fact the he himself even tried out the vegetarian life made me look at his assertions in a more positive light. The questions that he raises are questions I would not have necessarily thought of if I was trying to think up reasons to eat/not eat meat and because of that, it gave me a better idea of why people think the way they do about the eating animals dilemma.

Lydia Jessup's picture

Yes, I trust Pollan

 I trust that what Pollan writes is accurate and I respect his opinions and ideas about food.  I agree with a lot of what he says, but not all of it, and I don’t think he expects or wants the reader to agree.  I like thinking about the different issues he raises and trying to think about food from a different perspective than I have before.  Some of what I have read has disturbed me, but I have found it beneficial and I think it is important to have that kind of information available.  A lot of the information I have read before from various sources such at PETA and the Humane Society because my aunt is into animal rights and sends me articles every so often. At the end of this I will need to formulate my own opinion about food in our society, but right now am still in the process of mulling things over. 

I was a vegetarian for nine years because in first grade my friends and I thought it would be a fun thing to try together.  I don’t remember which one of us came up with this crazy idea, but it wasn’t until I was a little older that I started to learn about the inhumane way animals are treated in the food industry.  I have switched back to eating meat, but lately I have reconsidered becoming a vegetarian once again.  I think that it is natural and beneficial to eat meat, but I do not think it is right for the animals to be kept in small cages, fed unnatural food, and treated like machines.  The processes that Pollan describes make me uncomfortable.  I would, however, be fine with eating meat from an animal that was raised and slaughtered on a farm where he/she was treated ethically.

As a side note, after reading this section I really want to have a pet pig. 

kdlz's picture

Do I Trust Pollan?

I think I do. I think one of the reasons why I trust Pollan is because of the way he writes: he has a particular style and voice. I think this helps him relate to his readers -- so they feel like they know him and like him, and thus trust what he says. Another reason why I trust what he writes is because of the amount of sources and information that are backing up what he says -- it's obvious he has done all his research. As some people mentioned in class, it was also nice to see him second-guessing himself, as well as showing us some of the questions HE had (and later on answered). 

One of the main reasons why I trust him is because I already had some similar ideas from previous classes/experiences. I took an APES class in high school, and we learned all about the benefits of organic farming vs. commercial farming, the carbon footprint of our foods (because they need to be transported such great distances, that even if they're 'organic', the fuel used to transport the goods offset any environmental benefits of organic farming), treatment of animals etc. So many of the things Pollan discussed in the chapters were topics I had learned about -- so it made me predisposed to believe it (since i learned about it!)

One of the points that Pollan brought up that I definitely agree with is the idea that if we were 'closer' to the animals that end up on our dinner table, then we would be more 'bothered' by the idea of slaughtering them (and more involved in the humane treatment of them). Last year I watched a youtube video called 'The Truth about the Meat Industry' and since I haven't been able to look at meat the same way. Before watching the video, I had NO idea about the atrocities that occur in the raising/slaughtering of Chickens, Cows, Pigs, etc. I didn't think much about the meat I was eating. After watching that video, it makes it a lot harder to eat meat  because I think of the unnecessary pain/suffering the animals went through (I only eat chicken now -- I would cut it out, but it's been a staple in my diet, so I'm not sure how to yet)

lcatlin's picture

 I trust Michael Pollan for

 I trust Michael Pollan for the truth in his facts. Its obvious to see that he has strong opinions about what he writes about, but because they are so obvious, its easy to separate the two. Although the challenges the ideas of vegetarians to be naive, he does also challenge the way that omnivores in the United States eat their meat. Pollan's writing style and point of view does not turn the reader into the villain, but the culture of the consumer as a whole and the industries. Some things that Pollan talks about makes me want to scribble angrily in the margins contradicting him, but he usually does it to himself a paragraph or two later. For this reason, I trust him. Although he does has an opinion, he shows both sides, and the facts are easy to see. 

I think an important last point to talk about in response to our reading is that although animals dying and being eaten is a natural thing, the way it is done the vast majority of the time is not natural; in the way that they are no longer raised, but farmed. 

maliha's picture

Trust

     I'm not quite sure why I trust Pollan. It might be because I feel kind of obligated to believe things written in books. But he sounds trustworthy, like he's only doing all this research to inform his own decisions and that he is just letting us know as something extra.
    When I make a decision about anything while reading this book, like whether organic is good or if I should stop eating meat, his argument changes and so does my mind. I feel like he is giving us both sides of the story because I can't make up my own mind about these issues.
    My parents get chicken from a halal slaughterhouse that I've only been to once because it disgusted me so much. I do like supermarkets better because the meat there doesn't really look like it ever came from an animal. Pollan says that is the problem because we're so far removed from where our meat comes from, we can't make informed choices about what to eat. And it's true, I eat without thinking about where my food came from and what it was before it became my food. I don't think I could look an animal in the eye and watch it die, then still be able to eat it.

 

rmilitello's picture

Do I Trust Pollan?

 When I first started reading The Omnivore's Dilemma I realized that I really had no idea how the food industry worked. While I was reading through the chapters I felt as though Pollan was revealing these secrets that the food industry had been trying to keep hidden all along. Yet, the food industry may not want the general public to know things that would prevent them from buying more of a product, but maybe it is not so much that the food industry is hiding things from the consumer, but more that the consumer simply doesn't ask enough questions. I want to trust Pollan because I feel as though when he wrote the book he was taking the time to ask the questions that people usually don't think to ask. Not only that, I could not imagine  that Pollan would go through the trouble of gathering information about the food we eat and writing about it if he didn't feel passionately about the subject and didn't feel that people should know what they are putting into their systems. Although it may not always be the case, I feel as though most people who are extremely passionate about a subject will go to great lengths to know as much as they can about what they feel strongly about. 

I have to say though, when Pollan began to talk about his personal experiences with eating meat and started bringing his own opinion onto the pages I felt as though the book lost some of its reliability. Yet, if Pollan didn't do that then I think the book might have been less interesting as well. I would like to think that when writing this book Pollan tried not to be biased, and I will have to read on to see if that is truly the case. 

hlehman's picture

Food Detective

 Although I am a Vegetarian and do not plan on changing my eating habits, I am convinced by Pollan’s claims and trust many of the points he makes.  Nothing I have read in The Omnivore’s Dilemma has fully convinced me that being a Vegetarian is really that bad- only that there a few problems with it and ways in which it is harmful to the environment.  Many of the points Pollan makes support being a Vegetarian, such as the descriptions of the chickens and cow farms.  I understand Pollan’s views and agree with his idea that Vegans and Vegetarians often fail to understand the way the natural world works, but I still believe that being a Vegetarian is a good thing for the environment and myself, and nothing Pollan says makes me feel guilty about it.  I trust what Pollan says because every claim he makes is supported by extensive facts and research.  In some ways, I feel that Pollan is like a food detective and journalist.  He went through all the steps- researching locations of different farms and visiting them, comparing animal treatments, talking to different people and getting quotes from different farmers, workers, other experts, etc.  Trusting Pollan’s claims in The Omnivore’s Dilemma is like trusting what one reads in The New York Times.  You might not always agree with what you read or want to believe it, but you know you can trust it because all the facts are there to prove it. 

 

jrf's picture

trust, more or less

I trust Pollan when I feel like I am able to draw my own conclusions about the information he provides. Most of the time, I feel that Pollan does not argue in favor of a particular answer to the questions he poses (this may be because I have not read the whole book-- I wonder if by the end he develops a comprehensive eating theory?), and so I feel that Pollan allows me to do my own thinking about the issues he presents. Of course, I have pretty much no background knowledge about corn's mating habits or the workings of the organic food industry, so the decisions Pollan makes behind the scenes about what information to present and how to present it are difficult for me to recognize or judge. In this area, I have been trusting Pollan to make fair and truthful decisions for reasons that are probably not entirely sound-- he cites sources, he sounds impartial, he seems to come at environmental issues from a similar angle to mine, etc.

As I read the chapter on vegetarianism, a subject which I actually know something about (or, at least, more than I do about corn biology), I was much more conscious of a bias present in Pollan's writing. Since this was the first chapter in which he expressed views directly contrary to ones I hold, I'm wondering now how much bias was present in the earlier chapters that I didn't notice because I felt the same way-- and/or whether I percieved his bias as much larger/more significant because I disagreed with it. In this chapter, though, since I was familiar with Pollan's subject matter, I still felt able to draw my own conclusions from the data he presented when I combined it with my own thoughts, so I still more or less trusted Pollan's words. That is, I understood them to be a valid and valuable analysis that I take in and do with what I wanted.

Calála's picture

Trust and vegetarianism

For the most part as I have been reading Pollan's book I have found myself trusting his argument. But that does not mean that I necessarily agree with all of it. While reading the chapter about vegetarians, the part of Pollan's argument that sturck me the most was that being a vegetarian "alienates [him] from other people and, odd as this might sound, from a whole dimension of human experience" (314). As a a vegetarian I will admit that there have been more than a few times when I have wished that I ate mean for the sake of it being convenient. This occurs most often when I am traveling and I am eating according to another culture's dietary norms. However, despite the fact that once in a while it would be easier if I could just eat some chicken or steak, I do not agree with Pollan that bein a vegetarian forces isolation from cultural traditions. Over the years my sister and I have both become vegetarian (she was vegan for a few years as well). These dietary choices have allowed my family to create our own traditions. I have never felt like I missed out on Thanksgiving because I wasn't eating Turkey or that skipping the fish at Passover seder meant I was skipping out on the entire holiday. Just because I trust that Pollan's arguments are well-supported and carefully researched, does not mean that I am entirely convinced that his views are right.

pxie's picture

Trust in Pollan...

I think nobody will deny that reading the book is a lot fun, especially all the metaphors he uses in the book. (if some vegetarians feel uncomfortable about some parts of the book, i'm sorry).. At the very beginning, I trusted him just like I trusted every expert in his/her field. But later, I find myself unable to distrust him because he was describing his own experience: he collected all the data through out the industry and interviewed all the people related. Then he put forward his argument based on his experience. I also agree what one of the students said that Pollan distinguishes his opinions from the fact. He does not make any emotional comment when stating a fact, which makes his arguments more believable.  Besides, I can see no point why Pollan is cheating us

 

Thanks to Pollan, I begin to think twice when I'm about to eat, which I believe as a good thing.  

thatcaliforniagirl13's picture

Pollan is Quite Reliable

I feel that Pollan is reliable. I am convinced that he definitely put great thought into what he criticized and researched. The way that he manages to tie in stories into the facts he presents are quite interesting to me. There is a possibility that I find him more reliable and credible because he is using scientific research and he actually names and visits the places he accuses of not being entirely organic. I feel that the arguments he makes are extremely well-researched. In some ways, I find Pollan to be quite sarcastic and playful with the subject. Nonetheless, I feel inclined to trust him. He not only criticizes meat-lovers, but also the people that choose to keep meat and animal by-products out of their meals. 

After having read Chapter 17, I for one, was disgusted with the concrete description of the way a cow is stunned and slaughtered. In class, I had said that I took pleasure in not knowing where my meat comes from. I would rather just leave that in the back of my mind when I have a big, juicy sirloin steak on my plate. I have heard all of that facts before, but I just tend to put it all aside. I was disturbed by those images as I was reading, until I just grew speechless. It made me truly think that I may just be living in denial or that there is something in me that tells me that it is okay to eat meat, possibly my culture.

 
 
Annagibs's picture

Obliged to Trust

I feel obliged to trust Pollan for a few reasons, namely his tone and rhetorical skill. I find his tone to be irritable, compassionate, and erudite.  Irritable in the sense that he never seems content with anything the industrial food system has to offer, and often throws a few snide remarks into his description of the goings-on at large food factories and slaughter houses.  To the plight of the animals, he is quiet empathetic (maybe sympathetic is the better word) and always gives the animals a fighting chance to be more than the lumbering machine-beasts the food companies want the general public to perceive them as. As for erudite, he is very methodical in the progression of his points, the presentation of his arguments, and his conclusions are both comprehensive and achieve some high meaning than just repeating the initial question. The reason I trust him is because he makes me feel that his interpretation of this entire situation is entirely human; he showcases his disgust, his empathy, and his capacity for clear thought completely.

Rabbitbmc's picture

If Pollan Were a Cow

I do trust Pollan, but I'm not entirely sure why. It is probably because of all the evidence he brings to the table. He could write a whole other book with just his references and acknowledgments alone! It could also be the fact that he dedicated so much time into unearthing these hidden facts about organic food. Since he has so much evidence, I get the impression that he truly believes in his work, which in turn makes me believe him. This is probably pretty naive of me since plenty of people have written books on horrible subjects that they believed in. But his perseverance and fervent desire to reveal the hardcore facts make me trust him. I could be wrong in doing so, and its very possible that I should be more critical while reading these passages, but I can't help it. Pollan has turned me into a believer!

I have been a vegetarian for three years. This is mostly because I consider any meat to be, well, meat! Whether it's chicken or cow or dog or human, it's an animal to me. To eat any of those plainly creeps me out.
Pollan suggests that vegetarians don't understand how the natural world works, and though this doesn't offend me personally I keep thinking about the phrase "humanely slaughtered", because this is an oxymoron in my book! If Pollan were a cow, I guarantee you that he would not want to be slaughtered, no matter how "humane" it might sound.
 

Slaughter is slaughter is slaughter, no matter how many positive adjectives you place in front of it. Go vegetarians!
 

jtm715's picture

Trust in Pollan

 Personally, I trust Pollan as I'm reading the book, although for me that probably comes from ignorance. I didn't start out reading the book with any detailed prior knowlegde about the pollination of corn or the requirements for having an organic farm. Because I don't have any pre-established information on the topics, I trust Pollan as a legitimate source (Also, did anyone else notice the irony in his name? I just realized that now...). Additionally I think I tend to trust him more because the information he gives us sounds more like scientific fact rather than his opinion. When he does give his opinion, he makes it obvious that this isn't fact by tying in his personal life to the story.

Shayna S's picture

Trust in Food, Trust in Pollan

After reading these three segments, I at first felt confused. Questions were prompted from Pollan's answers. Is organic really as bad as I read it to be? What about the section in which Pollan relates the changes the organic movement has brought to farming industry? What about the rest of the chapter, which relates the changes farming industry has brought to the organic movement? I can't help but think that Pollan is trying to get me, the reader and consumer target, to step back and think; okay, this is what has been done up to this point in order to realize the original intent of the organic movement, but it is still a long way from our ideal. In the case of his claims about animals and their various degrees of treatment and suffering, I now question if not eating meat from an industrial animal farm can morally justify blatant ignorance of the symbiotic relationship of domestication that Pollan brings up. Then, images of the Dish of the Day from Douglas Adams' The Restaurant at the End of the Universe (a talking cow-like animal that was happy to be eaten and offered information to customers on its tastiest parts) appear in my mind's eye. Has capitalism outweighed culture in justifying slaughter? Has profit been traded for respect not only of the animals, but of the consumer as well? With the secretive nature of industrial animal husbandry that Pollan reports, its little wonder some people do not trust the meat market for his or her moral fulfillment. Perhaps Vegetarians and Vegans are naive, but only because they may lump the "principle" of eating meat with the "practice" of obtaining it. Becoming a Vegetarian or Vegan would send a consumer message to factory farms, yet, like Pollan, I do not want to stop eating meat. He does offer a solution in the form of small, humane, and public farms, but how obtainable are these ethical meats when the only convenient, nearby market is a supermarket?  How can I obtain the "right to look"? Pollan writes, "If our concern is for the health of nature-rather than, say, the internal consistency of our moral code or the condition of our souls-then eating animals may sometimes be the most ethical thing to do." Thinking about his argument, I can only agree, partially because I am a biased omnivore, but mostly because he makes a very good point in describing the evolutionary relationships of domestication.

But what makes me so sure I can trust him? First, check out the "Sources" section in the back of the book. The sources Pollan uses are numerous and relevant. It shows a certain work ethic and level of integrity to have a bibliography that credits used works accordingly and with appropriate additional information. Perhaps more importantly, he appeals directly to me, and while that is a dangerous basis for trust, the citations and bibliography help to strengthen his believability. Pollan's written reactions and questions that he proposes are reactions and questions I experienced while reading through his observations.  I felt a connection between what he was saying, and what he anticipated my reactions to be. It brought a more personal, human tone to the book. 

 

 

Anne Dalke's picture

Metaphors for Writing

Going off topic once again....
I want to record our "metaphors for writing," which include
cooking
sculpture
running
build-your-own-sandwich bar
stage
struggle
suicide note
rubber band
excursion
drill
war
diary
organizer
roller coaster.
We had an interesting discussion, not just about what dimensions of writing these metaphors highlight but what they omit (writing as "rubber band,"  for instance, emphasizes how it "stretches" you, but may not allow for the sort of writing that doesn't; writing as "suicide note" focuses on the intensity and insight that we want our writing to express, but doesn't acknowledge the sort of writing that might be more playful and less profound).

Serendip Visitor's picture

.....well~

I actually don't think Pollan is that pushy about anything. As far as his discourse against vegetarians, I didn't see so much assertion against their views as encouragement to invest in them, to back them up further by experiencing/reaffirming why they don't eat meat. I may be cheating right now, because I've read more of the sections... because I read half of them by mistake... NAY! On purpose! **Perseverance in believing I am intelligent is key!!!!** but his idea of making slaughterhouse walls transparent is excellent. Being vegetarian, it would be an absolute encouragement to me to see that the cows killed are (ideally) slaughtered humanely. Slaughtered humanely, but slaughtered nonetheless~ for better or worse I would remain vegetarian, comforted that I had made a more informed, objective study, before reverting back to my emotions. It at least allows me to discern between moral/political/economic/societal/schma acceptability and my own personal bubblesphere of hippiedom.

I trust Pollan because he has humor. Not that he is particularly funny or wildly entertaining~ more like self-effacement, or an admittance of his inability to write the expose he wanted to, because they wouldn't let him through the blue door. Science offers no opinion, and any conclusion, he says, based solely on science is based, for the most part, on simplicity. One variable at a time is all that can be tested~ though I think extensive studies in some arenas would allow a buildup of individual variables into a very complex system. I think the point he's trying to make is that whatever that system is, we haven't figured it out yet, and to base an opinion on a factor, rather than a whole, is a mistake. I trust him because he relates only what is personal, and because he distinguishes his opinions AS opinions, not facts. And if he does state a scientific fact, he doesn't assign an opinion to it.

Serendip Visitor's picture

So Gullible...

(I thought be did a really good job discussing this in class the other day but for the sake of assignments, here you go...) Call me gullible but I totally buy into most of his arguments for a few reasons. As someone previously mentioned, he uses some credible sources that particularly highlight his arguments. The sections that talked about Peter Singer and his book, "The Animal Liberation" come directly from Singer’s book and truly consider a bunch of his points. I think using such sources helps me to trust Pollan more because they are based on other credible things. Also, he seems to consider both sides which makes me think he is a more neutral source of information. In addition, I am inclined to trust him because the information he is divulging seems very realistic. I’ve heard of these issues in other arenas and can compare my knowledge to what he is saying.

Now, lets consider why I don't trust him. He puts a lot of things in fact statements that I don't necessarily agree with. For instance, on page 310, he says, "Murder and Rape are natural". First of all, I don' think this is a cut and dry issue. But besides that particular point, he makes a lot of his points in this matter-of-fact way that are too forceful. It makes me trust him less because his arguments sound more like opinions.

As a whole, I cannot say one-way if I trust him or not but I appreciate his tone of speech and find the information he is giving out interesting. Regardless, I am inclined to read more.

Maiya Zwerling's picture

So gullible...

 (Reposting under my name)

 

(I thought be did a really good job discussing this in class the other day but for the sake of assignments, here you go...) Call me gullible but I totally buy into most of his arguments for a few reasons. As someone previously mentioned, he uses some credible sources that particularly highlight his arguments. The sections that talked about Peter Singer and his book, "The Animal Liberation" come directly from Singer’s book and truly consider a bunch of his points. I think using such sources helps me to trust Pollan more because they are based on other credible things. Also, he seems to consider both sides which makes me think he is a more neutral source of information. In addition, I am inclined to trust him because the information he is divulging seems very realistic. I’ve heard of these issues in other arenas and can compare my knowledge to what he is saying.

Now, lets consider why I don't trust him. He puts a lot of things in fact statements that I don't necessarily agree with. For instance, on page 310, he says, "Murder and Rape are natural". First of all, I don' think this is a cut and dry issue. But besides that particular point, he makes a lot of his points in this matter-of-fact way that are too forceful. It makes me trust him less because his arguments sound more like opinions.

As a whole, I cannot say one-way if I trust him or not but I appreciate his tone of speech and find the information he is giving out interesting. Regardless, I am inclined to read more.

 

Maiya Zwerling's picture

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 I am not exactly sure why this didn't save the first time I posted it - Oh say two months ago - but here we go again. I very much trust Pollan. Not only was this book recommended to me by many people I know who are interested in this type of education but also it was something I have heard about for years. Pollan introduces his arguments with the supplement of the sources in the back - a huge long list of credible places in which he found his information. Moving to style, Pollan states his arguments with such assurance and validity that his tone makes me believe what he is saying. Although he clearly has an agenda and seems to be on the more liberal side of thing, Pollan's arguments are clear, straight forward and laid out reasonably. You can logically follow them, even if they introduce new information. The combination of all of these factors leads me to believe Pollan's book is one to trust in and, in reality, I very much do.